The Stars Twinkle Comments
I was on guard to defend the border
In any war time it is done by an order
I was happy with only one bright hope
Felt no pain at all while exercising on rope
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Jennifer Long oh wow.... yes.... heart breaking..... 3 minutes ago · Like
Dear Sir, Very touching. Readers would be deeply moved. How much one would be deeply saddened on such situations has been elaborately dealt with in your poem. Though the poem reveals vivid memories, the memories are bitter and unhappy memories. A cathartic experience To make a mention about stars that twinkle is just a consolation; and by looking at the sky, the child may seem a star that twinkles. With regards, K. Sadasivan, Chennai Aug 07,2012
Maya Dearth A heartfelt poem...sad...beautiful about an hour ago · Like
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Ketsy Rivera This poem touched my heart Hasmukh. I'm sorry to hear about the family loss. 12 minutes ago via mobile · Like
Sanjay Jha Too good to know that your poetic feeling elaborates your capacity to become the Father...all the best! ! 22 minutes ago · Like
I was on guard to defend the border In any war time it is done by an order I was happy with only one bright hope Felt no pain at all while exercising on rope
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7/27/2025 2:47:26 PM # 1.0.0
You write of your personal journey of sadness with profundity and thought. A devastating loss to lose a child. How one as human feels helpless against the universal powers. How you hold the thought of your child carved in your mind is a touching reminder that we should all remember and honor those we loved and were taken from us to soon.