The Stars In Isght. Comments

Hey Arielle. I liked your poem and could relate to it, especially when I was your age. You don't have to take my advice but if you are really looking for a title for this excellent poem, I usually bring out a line from the poem the metaphorically describes the piece. I would suggest: 'The Stars In Sight'. What do you think? I hope I helped. Regardless I enjoyed your poem. Jessica Evans