The Stars Before The Dawn Comments

I love the vague allusion to the incident of Fall in the garden of Eden. This poem beautifully captures the ambiguity of love that stirs both delight and shame in humans.

If you are talking about immoral / extra-marital then you have sinned but if it is with your lawful partner than no need to worry, I take it a symbolic mention here and interpret it differently. Full ****

The love that one shares with another is never a sin. Besides the suns a star too, its just the only one to make us blush.

Beautifully written. Loved it.

This is an exceptional piece.....well expressed.....thanks for sharing....

Don't worry LeeAnn, our ‘sinful' activity will take hundreds of light years to reach the stars! ! Top marks.

And the sunrise blinds us into shame Of our nakedness knowing we have sinned...naked truth!

Love between man and women is very natural, we don't know much about the celestial body, their attraction through light may be a love bond between them who knows. Excellent poem.