Friday, April 24, 2009

The Stars Are Falling Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am laying in a field,
my arms act as a shield.
Protecting my eyes from what is coming,
They cover my ears protecting me from the evil lies.
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ashleymarie love zysek
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Delicate Heart 05 May 2009

A swaying piece you become lost whilst in reading, very tender poem

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James Mclain 29 April 2009

In Alabama they fall as rain the tears through the sky from your eye..iip.

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John Lyday 24 April 2009

Not a good idea for the stars to fall. I like them way up there. This is a good poem ashleymarie.

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ashleymarie love zysek

ashleymarie love zysek

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