Monday, February 6, 2017

The Stars Are Calling Comments

Rating: 5.0

the stars are calling
the moon is shining
burning bright fires are playing
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Terence George Craddock
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Annette Aitken 13 February 2017

You can always rely on nature, to give us something to write about. This title draws you in. ;)

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Cigeng Zhang 10 February 2017

The starry night looked so vivid under your poetic pen. A beautiful poem dedicated to a moonlit night.Enjoyed!

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Valsa George 09 February 2017

Beautiful. I can visualize that scene...! . Definitely it might look like the dome of heaven has fallen down!

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Mj Lemon 06 February 2017

The noise and bustle of the first stanza are balanced perfectly by the calm and serenity of the second.

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Terry Craddock 07 February 2017

wrote few few lines on a card, had this amazing development, interacting with nature, but no time to save the lines in the rush, this will happen more often soon, but a few lines is better than nothing

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