Tuesday, June 13, 2023

The Stars And The Moon Are Jealous Comments

Rating: 5.0

They danced passionately
Under the canopy
Of the night sky
Formed a single line
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rebecca Navarre 27 July 2023

And Ever Ever so many well deserved 'Congratulations'! .. And Also Beyond #'S of course! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 27 July 2023

And such a wonderous, beautiful and joyful feel! .. Truly incredible! .. Bringing such smiles to the readers heart! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 27 July 2023

Ahh, i was going to catch this next time around... But Awesome! .. So Beautifully Beautifully worded! ..

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Susan Williams 14 July 2023

it is so good to sit here dreaming of this event.... top romantic hearts for this yummy poem

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Susan Williams 14 July 2023

oh! this is so lovely! I dream of being that woman dancing in the arms of her love! Thank you for sharing this with us

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Indira Renganathan 22 June 2023

The rhythmic dance, the murmuring stream, the sparkling eyes and the jealousy of the moon and the stars....how bbeautifully connected to create a poem.Well done Rose..Kudos with many**********

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Jealousy keeps some going…

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"…. feet moved rhythmically To the tune of Achy Breaky Heart"… My heart too, Rose Marie

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Congratulations, Rose Marie. This poem ranks #62 today

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Congratulations, Rose Marie. This poem has entered the list of Best Poems of Members today.

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A very attractive poem of love, dancing "under the canopy of night sky". Fabulous.

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M. Asim Nehal 14 June 2023

A dance everyone would like to do and enjoy, very romantic poem, enjoyed the moonlight and the dance.5******

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Poetic Sky 14 June 2023

Brilliant poem. I am happy to note that celestial bodies do get envied. The moon and the stars Are jealous of the sparkles In their eyes. Full *****

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 June 2023

Bravo Rose-Marie I enjoyed it much

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Anil Kumar Panda 14 June 2023

The lines are flowing so smoothly like a stream. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed. Thanks.

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Anjandev Roy 14 June 2023

Of the flowing stream...... lovely write..... thank u, dear poetess....

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Sandra Feldman 14 June 2023

A rhymical, so lovely amorous poetic dance, we feel the loving movement as if transported and in a trance. Such an unforgettable and lovely poem. Thank you for the gifted romance!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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