Monday, September 20, 2021

The Stars Comments

Rating: 5.0

The little star in the sky asks,
'We have played enough
With the celestial beings up here.
Can we play now with the kids
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
COMMENTS
Evelyn Judy Buehler 18 November 2021

A beautifully rendered tale of heavenly bodies.5 stars,

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 November 2021

A well crafted poem with stunning imagery. I concur with Robert's comment; a nice children's poem and adults' as well.

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Indira Renganathan 18 October 2021

A lovely poem...a message to the stars of the sky about the super stars of the Earth...5*****

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Bharati Nayak 22 September 2021

A beautiful poem! Children are inquisitive and curious to know the celestial bodies like moon and stars.A child star may be inquisitive about our earth and would like to play with our children.An imaginative write, lovely and beautiful.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 September 2021

A beautiful poem with a meaningful message. Liked how this poem was crafted and presented. Great thoughts to ponder about. To my Poem List.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 September 2021

An excellent poem sir! Appreciated the undertone! !

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