The Stars Comments

What a superb poetic talent you have! Please, my friend, keep writing.

The pains that I hid under my skin, I thought they were my akin.....awesome lines: -)

Nice read.

that's awesome and soul touching

It is my pleasure to the poetic lines like these. I think the feeling expressed here by the poet is about a broken friendship or love or may be both. Whatever might be the reason yet i enjoy the beauty in these lines. 'And I gazed at the shining stars They never did find my tears I asked them, why didn't you become my friend? I never did act as a fiend. To you my friend- It is well articulated thought of the poet flowed all through the poem sprinkling adrenaline. Dearest poet you are laudable and commendable and appreciable and remarkable. Perfect 10 ++++ Effort.... Bye for now.... The stars, With tears! '

that very pretty and very touching

A heartfelt well expressed emotion, well crafted thought

it touch my heart.....great poem

My eyes stung as I felt your pain and wished to help. This is a truly spectacular poem, with that wisdom that only the pained can know.

A lot of wisdom resides in this poem. You have illustrated your feelings totally and in the best way possible. It was definitely a pleasure to read

i feel ya great poem

in the stars, or in the wrinkles of the hand, lies eternity! good poem!

This is the thing about poetry and Art in general in that we can make beautiful metaphores out of the most hidious pain. Your poem ends flying hi to the stars, Vipins! ERA

Its true..when we crush the memories, surely one feels the rage of winds in mind! gud one!

no words to explain.............i like it very much.great

i see some pain in your heart but the way you write is so powreful keep it up and let the words flow

I felt the content of it, its worth digesting, Welldone

I love it.. but it seems as though your going through some troubles. your doing good keep it up. :)

parting has such great sorrow, and without stars there is no tomorrow, to wish in a well with no water is really not a wish unless you truly believe, and I believe your words my friend, until the end, bravo, keep writing.

Beautifully written. Great flow and choice of words. You could have used other ones, but the effect wouldn't have been so great. Lovely poetry.