Tuesday, July 4, 2006

The Starlit Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the world sleeps I lie awake
How can I sleep when my world breaks?
I stand alone in this starlit night
My dark life needs more than this mild light
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AMyth Kulkarni
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Nalini Hebbar 21 July 2006

this poem is really good...the rhyme and flow very good...the questions asked and the theme are good too...you have talent and a good control over english...good going...love...nalini

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Melissa Broomhead 21 July 2006

ur a great poet c ur poems r just wut every-1 needs people need 2 stop acting fake and realize the pain and saddness in the world cause trust me it aint filled wit shinny hearts and happy pplz

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