The Star (Senryu) Comments

Lovely writing. Could almost swear I already commented on this one, but it seems my memory is as fragile as stardust..(smile)

a dark star in the bright dream...wonderful expression...

Hmmm..another nice piece..Love it! ! !

Wonderful interplay of light and darkness. May your hidden dreams be realized. Love, SandraX

Excellent Sandr! . I like the way darkness reined as the star crossed, like an eclipse. I like the darkness, but not if it is happening to you! A great Senryu. love Karin

This is a delightful senryu, Sandra, and a mystical one as well. I hope your hidden dreams are pleasant ones! Carl.

A nice one, sandra...... but, why darkness reigns supreme? ? ? Let the dreams shine and remove the darkness forever, dear......

a lovely senryu...sandra...darkness does reign supreme

darkness has umpteen revelations in store...

may all your dreams come true and life is illuminated with the happiness and bliss god bless you

In the darkness Star carries hope of light!