Friday, August 1, 2008

The Star's Reflection, Show Only Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her-

Sitting outside by myself,
everyones asleep,
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Jessica Elizondo
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Ivan Donn Carswell 02 August 2008

The idea of one love and two precious views of it is rather well expressed here. Innovative and effectively presented. Rgds, Ivan

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dear jess, i fully believe love never dies, and you captured that in this poem, , i love it, keep writeing..

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Serenity Prayer 01 August 2008

very sweet. great job.

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Eman Awad 01 August 2008

i can totaly relate to that i loved it keep up the good work Eman Awad

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