The Star's Reflection, Show Only Love Poem by Jessica Elizondo

The Star's Reflection, Show Only Love

Rating: 5.0


Her-

Sitting outside by myself,
everyones asleep,
a silent tear,
streams down my face.

i look up at the stars, so beautiful.
they take my mind away from the present,
and everything I shed a tear for.
Then suddenly I wonder if your watching too....

I look at you,
but know I can't have you.
I think about your smile
and wonder if I'll ever see it again.

I shed a tear
because if I told you
you would probably
laugh in my face.

I'll hold all my love
that I have for you
inside, and hide these tears I cry.

Besides, who knows,
maybe these feelings will pass,
and I'll forget about the love we once shared.
Or....maybe not....

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Him-

My parents are fighting
so I walked outside.
It's like they don't even care anymore
And I could only think of one person that did....you.

You are so beautiful,
and your eyes are where I get lost.
Where did our love go?
Why did we have to pay the cost.

I look up at the stars,
and see them shinning bright.
Just like your golden smile
when I kissed you that night.

I was such a fool.
to have let you slip
through my fingers,
but I can't get you out of my head.

Maybe this is for the best, a tear hits my lip.
maybe I should move on.
Besides the love you had for me
is probably gone....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 02 August 2008

The idea of one love and two precious views of it is rather well expressed here. Innovative and effectively presented. Rgds, Ivan

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dear jess, i fully believe love never dies, and you captured that in this poem, , i love it, keep writeing..

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Serenity Prayer 01 August 2008

very sweet. great job.

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Eman Awad 01 August 2008

i can totaly relate to that i loved it keep up the good work Eman Awad

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