The city lights are shining.
And though I'm far away,
It won't be too much longer
Till I'm in their array.
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this didn't end the way I imagined, but turned out just as wonderful. you have a great talent.
Stars are always fascinating-especially shooting stars.I'd give you a ten with a tail of stars if i could vote.Lovely poem.
oh, i thought it was the other way, but never mind, ..A lovely piece, and another pleasure to read. I am in awe of you always. hugs, Meggie
Yes.... the stanzas twinkle.... how are the red carpet additions doing? aroha xx
Ouch. that ending is steamy.. great write as expected, from a great poet.
Awesome. An interesting read. Has character, ending was brilliant! D