Saturday, March 7, 2009

The Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

The city lights are shining.
And though I'm far away,
It won't be too much longer
Till I'm in their array.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Awesome. An interesting read. Has character, ending was brilliant! D

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Cristy Upshaw 09 June 2009

this didn't end the way I imagined, but turned out just as wonderful. you have a great talent.

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Stars are always fascinating-especially shooting stars.I'd give you a ten with a tail of stars if i could vote.Lovely poem.

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Laurie Hill 21 March 2009

Excellent, just excellent 10

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Meggie Gultiano 14 March 2009

oh, i thought it was the other way, but never mind, ..A lovely piece, and another pleasure to read. I am in awe of you always. hugs, Meggie

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Emancipation Planz 09 March 2009

Yes.... the stanzas twinkle.... how are the red carpet additions doing? aroha xx

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Ouch. that ending is steamy.. great write as expected, from a great poet.

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