Saturday, December 19, 2020

The Stampeding Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

The rain had spoken to me yesternight-
Falling on the tin roof of my courtyard
Bombarding shouting commanding
All over stampeding
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Bharati Nayak 22 December 2020

The rain had spoken to me yesternight- Falling on the tin roof of my courtyard Bombarding shouting commanding All over stampeding But I didn't bother to pick up the words Rather I was intent To feel the coolness it brought in! - - -A wonderful poem.- - You enjoy the rain, find beauty in its coolness.

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SUNANDA 21 December 2020

Yes...it is nice to enjoy the beauty of rain, the sound of rain.....

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Thank you very much Sunanda. I know you love my poems. Glad to find your feedback

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Seema 20 December 2020

Feel the rain not the noise that it brings A beautiful thought well depicted

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Thanks a lot Seema. Glad you liked my piece. Now only I noticed!

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Seema 20 December 2020

Feel the rain Never mind its noise A beautiful thought well depicted

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Indira Renganathan 20 December 2020

This is very interesting...who talks to the rain as it is pouring 'Bombarding shouting commanding' loudly...we all only 'feel the coolness it brings in'...typically a poem of your style...5*****

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 December 2020

A well conveyed poem... Truly impressive and poetic....5 stars.... Bernard

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 December 2020

What a wonderful poem. A one of a kind and unique thought about the rain. Brilliantly penned. Five Stars! ! ! !

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Kostas Lagos 19 December 2020

A great, artistic piece of poetry

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Varsha M 19 December 2020

So mean sir just enjoy the coolness and not attend the call she sen. Nice poetry.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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