Wednesday, July 22, 2009

The Stalker Comments

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first came the obsession stage
then their mind became full of rage.
it does not matter if they're man or woman
for it is the same, their obsession becomes a game.
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Dr Hitesh Sheth 23 July 2009

a great write indeed, mesmerizing....................

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Shashendra Amalshan 23 July 2009

hello my dear sir! ! ! hi this is my first visit to your page.. Christine Kerr said to me go and read this one from you, .. cause it just blew her away.. true indeed.. this one is great mind blowing write indeed.. and i sort of know this feeling too...this is splendid.... thanks for you and thanks chris.. to asking me to read this one..A++ with lots of love shan

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Kranthi Pothineni 23 July 2009

Nice words flowed i good rhythm. Last but one verse is really good. Nice write.

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Christine Kerr 23 July 2009

Wow, I'm speechless, So interesting, I think Leslie hit the nail on the head.

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Carol Gall 22 July 2009

good write and very truthful

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