It’s six in the evening, 
and the sun began to go down.
I’m still drinking my soda at the park
when I looked up and saw her over yonder.
                
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A very sensible write..touching and travels deep in the heart

 
                     
                
I almost gave this a 10 but I finally settled on a 9. I didn't think it was presented as well as it might have been. The story was tremendous. It is the kind of thing poets dream about. That is why it got a nine. You need to take your imagination and run with it.Alas! GW62