Tuesday, February 12, 2013

The Stairs Comments

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It all starts with a stair case
form the womb we lay in front of it
crying and laughing at the same time
as our baby fingers trace the beginning
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Kasia Fedyk
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Hans Vr 17 March 2013

Very impressive write, Kasia. I like the connection of free will withthe will of the Father inside. Somehow all these great achievers tend to say, not onto us. Perhaps the greatest achievers are best at setting thier own will aside and at listening to the will of the Creator of day and night

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Shahzia Batool 05 March 2013

a lesson of life is woven in the lines-stairs & the design of staircase...as i perceive stairs are the tasks and tools raising us high, and the design of stairs means how beautifully we perform the tasks of life...it might be otherwise but poetry is open for interpretation, isn't it?

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Neela Nath Das 22 February 2013

Wonderful job. Keep writing.

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