Wednesday, October 19, 2016

The Stage Of My Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

In this oft' menacing stage of life
There is so much truth to my lines
This starring role in a play on 'Wit's' is a challenge
While glaring footlights oft' blind my mind;
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Mj Lemon 25 October 2016

A beautiful poem, Theo. There is a bittersweet quality. There's also something in the second stanza that reminds me of Romeo and Juliet.

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Theodora Onken 27 October 2016

Mj, thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. Your comments mean a lot to me. Romeo and Juliet-second stanza, yes, i can see that. This write was meant to be bittersweet- and is all fictional but you probably already had that figured out. We writers need all of the imagination we can come up with, don't we? Anyway, you are a dear and again, thank you for reviewing me. Always appreciated, Mj.

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