Friday, November 2, 2012

The Stage Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shivers expose the cold refrain.
Of tears composed of icy rain.
Falling from yesterdays page.
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Unwritten Soul 03 November 2012

Not only metaphor Yoonus, look at his sharpness on making lines and rhythm..that was awesome, to me it is awesome job. I like the artistic view in it_Soul

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