Monday, November 24, 2008

The Stag (Ballad) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Stag it ran through fields and woods
Flitting here darting there
Running fast from men with hoods
Fast as a hare
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Charmaine Sinclair 28 November 2008

In all of your poems, the words describe motions and stories in a smooth lyrical manner which is very effective. Poems of simple words and colourful worlds. I think, however, that 'new' in your first poem is meant to be knew?

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Mine Yours 25 November 2008

i love this poem it has such meaning and shows what you believe so much

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