Tuesday, November 15, 2022

The Stability Of The Mind Comments

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To live life in this world itself is a great task
Each and every task has its own risk; without risk
Some of the tasks cannot be achieved completely;
It does not mean that the 'risking life' factor
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David Wood 15 November 2022

I think a little tension and stress is good for the mind, as well as exertion or rest. A good 12 syllable per line poem.

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Prem Nizar Hameed 17 November 2022

I agree with your observation. Thanks a lot for your words of appreciation, dear friend.

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David Wood 15 November 2022

Gko

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