Saturday, September 8, 2018

The Squirrel Comments

Rating: 5.0

The little squirrel
Is jumping from
Branches to branches
Lifting its furry tail.
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Bharati Nayak
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Valsa George 01 March 2019

Squirrels are such wonderful creatures, so agile and brisk in their movements. It is a pleasure watching them even for the elders. So naturally I can imagine the excitement and joy of your son in having got a chance to play with a squirrel and let it be fed by his hand! A lovely description!

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They hop like hope Some times near And sometimes far. You have wonderfully related jumping of the squirrel from branch to branch to hopes of man from one to other. Beautiful...10

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Suratha Kumar Rout 06 October 2018

The jump of squirrel lifting its tail, climbing tree and eating but is a very beautiful seen. Thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 06 October 2018

Thank you Suratha Kumar Rout for stopping by and appreciating this poem.

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Suratha Kumar Rout 06 October 2018

The friendship of squirrel and Vicky. Very realistic description. Thanks.10+++

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Akhtar Jawad 12 September 2018

A nice poem on friendship.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

A well observation has been made on squirrel and it's gait. How squirrel lifting it's furry tail jumps branches to branches, plays hide seek with your little boy Vicky, it's climbing the tree swiftly and eating nut in hurry are so touchingly inscribed. A beautiful poem nicely executed.

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Bipin Churchung Rabha 11 September 2018

How lovely poem it is....your kid get a friend to play in his leisure....keep alive squirrels..... I love but our villager killed and eat squirrels. Thank you, ma'am, for sharing such a lovely poem.

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tom billsborough 09 September 2018

We have a reserve for red squirrels just North of the great port of Liverpool called Formby Point. It is a truly astonishing sight to watch their agile jumping. We can buy bags of peanuts and feed them. It's a real thrill. They are mostly active in Autumn. I can only think how well your beautiful poem conveys the excitement which you and your kid felt. This poem goes into my list of favourites.

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Rini shibu 08 September 2018

Beautiful poem about cute squirrels

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 September 2018

Nature, the endless wonder... and, Bharati, you have proved yet again how keen an observer you are!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2018

Currently, I am unable to use my voting option. I will vote some other day!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2018

A cute poem replete with imagery! Loved reading it ...10

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