Friday, May 1, 2015

The Squandered Life Comments

Rating: 4.5

An angel came out of a split atom as the trumpet sounded
A grand throne came down from Heaven for him to be mounted;
Air was sucked out of me; my senses lost contact with me
My eyes closed and like lightening, light was taken off me;
...
Read full text

Swamidhason Francis
COMMENTS
Sreelekha Premjit 01 May 2015

very well said, Swami. Loved reading this poem.

0 0 Reply
Jaishree Nair 01 May 2015

Only when we are at the death bed we realise we have squandered life.A good one.Thanks for sharing

0 0 Reply
Chinedu Dike 01 May 2015

A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned with good rhyme scheme. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

1 0 Reply
Swamidhason Francis

Swamidhason Francis

Nagercoil, Tamil Nadu, India
Close
Error Success