The Sprouting Tears Comments

A very poignant moment is drawn here with the plea of sprouting tears. Truly in the agonized moments the tear drops what we drop down, they are just the overflown remnants of the flood which inundates the heart and mind ruthlessly...... very well described.

A very poignant write. Yes, we all have intense pain. But many times people take tears as a pity. And this pity will take away the very courage to move forward...I feel it's better to cry alone and she'd those painful tears as it can definitely save us from heart attack and B.P....this is true if pain remain in heart health will be affected. Not for just fun I wrote. It's true... Please do read my poem Tears! , I wrote recently.

“later that night i held an atlas in my lap ran my fingers across the whole world and whispered where does it hurt? it answered everywhere everywhere everywhere.” You feel that pain is something exclusive to yourself... All those who sing of a beautiful sunrise and blossoming blooms also experience the same intense pain as you feel many times in life...But through droplets of saline water shed out from the eyes in private, they allow pain to find its own escape and hearts become lighter... In life, we are all feigners! But pain shouldn't let you shatter Dinesh....! Losing hope is something serious.....! Very very poignant! !

a v meaningful write Sir.....tears that sprout but do not roll down the cheeks, reveals the hidden pain left unexpressed to others.........so its better to cry and relieve your heart from the burden of misery an excellent write, ...njoied

Deep and complex write, with so much hidden angst, but no tears fall, the depth of your emotions spill out into inspired lines, like tears rolling down your cheeks in sadness as you write from your heart and soul! ! Beautiful write!

Your feelings are tears that sprout and roll down in the lines of your poem. Tears that sprout and dry out show your deep concern. You don't let others know about it. Let tears flow my friend. They wash away agony of the heart. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

Don't sprout too many tears Dinesh, they will smudge your wonderful ink.