Thursday, June 16, 2016

The Springs Of Love Comments

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The sound of the splintering stones
Is all my whispered lullaby,
Your perseverance against weary bones
Carries its own sweet melody.
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Haala Marikar
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Chinedu Dike 10 July 2016

Beautiful tribute to all loving mums, elegantly penned in exquisite poetic diction with insight. Your employment of profound metaphors and good rhyme scheme to drive home your conviction is both appropriate and poetically remarkable. As soft as mums' love. Thanks for sharing Haala. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 17 June 2016

Beauty! Thanks for the mother's love spilling poem. X

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