Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, October 20, 2012

The Spring Has Comments

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Spring has lovely means to bring
All birds together with cuckoo to sing
Not by poor along but also king
To feel about change around the ring
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 October 2012

Nice Timothy Ramirez16 minutes ago Nice, I like it Comment +1 Good idea but very conventional

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 October 2012

Sibghatullah Khan14 minutes ago I don't know why all good ideas melt into a love story. The poets start off celebrating the coming of Spring and end up smooching and caressing the beloveds or lovers. But, of course, Spring is the right season for love. What else they would do. A poet like T.S. Eliot starts out his Love Song with Let's go then, you and I but, we know, it's not a traditional love poem. Traditional love theme is the the most beaten down topic for poetry. If you wanna make a difference, please write on something else. Comment +1 ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 October 2012

Seema Salman14 minutes ago ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 October 2012

Spring has lovely means to bring All birds together with cuckoo to sing Not by poor along but also king To feel about change around the ring

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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