Friday, January 27, 2023

The Spring Comes Comments

Rating: 5.0

After every cold glance
Comes the spring
With a friendly smile
A soft stirring
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Nosheen Irfan
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MAHTAB BANGALEE 30 January 2023

spring comes to shower the letter of heart; great to read and love it

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Richard Wlodarski 28 January 2023

Your poem brings a breath of fresh air to the numbing cold of a Canadian winter. Can hardly wait to get back on the tennis court come spring. Nosheen, THX for the warmth in your poem.

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M. Asim Nehal 28 January 2023

Superb poem, need some motivation and inspiration and this poem takes us there.5****

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 January 2023

Wonderful Nosheen especially the last three lines

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Rob Lamberton 28 January 2023

Some Winters seem like more than a glancing blow. I suppose that makes the smile of Spring all the more fragrant!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 January 2023

A fabulous poem. Your last four lines are my favourites. Top score and to my fav list

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 January 2023

Like the fragrance of first love letter.... very beautifully written. A beautiful poem on spring.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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