Wednesday, April 16, 2008

The Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rosy amber sun rises beyond
high hazy blue mountains
Early morning dew drops
moisten manicured gardens
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Hemakumar Nanayakkara
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Vinod Kumar 10 January 2009

A very good commentary of beautiful spring, yes it was really a spring, thanks for shairng,10+.

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Simone Inez Harriman 15 August 2008

I felt like I was standing there witnessing all this beauty with the accompanied scents of spring.

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Fay Slimm 07 August 2008

This surely is true poetic observation of all things naural. Very well prosed, and delightful to read. Best wishes for future work. From Fay Slimm....Thank you for the kind opinion of my piece called Longings.

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Greenwolfe 1962 04 August 2008

I gave this a 10 because beauty is what poetry should be, in both the heart and mind. You grace both at the same time with your words. You are a pleasure to read. GW62

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Bonnie Collins 20 May 2008

Rosy amber sun rises beyond hig hazy blue mountains! ! ! Excelent! ! Lovely feel of hte warmth of spring to the reader...

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Kesav Easwaran 18 May 2008

A colourful poem this …springs into reader’s mind. Hemakumar’s imagination ascends to ‘high hazy blue mountains! ’ Ten votes…

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Rema Prasanna 12 May 2008

All colors and flowers of spring in this poem, a wonderful creation, spring the most vibrant season in visulas. a very good write

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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 29 April 2008

Hemakumar - Looking at the same spring rebirths you see beauty and harmony and I see struggle and. escape. Thanks for your kind remarks regarding my 'The Fallen.' Best wishes - Cheryl

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Abha Sharma 26 April 2008

you have painted spring in its most beautiful colors.. the soothing green pastures, cattles grazing, hyacinth etc...very sensuous and nerve pleasing...

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James Niles 26 April 2008

What a great sigh of relief Life renews itself and despite the other winter world we know everything will be okay April here is the kindest month

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 22 April 2008

This is simply Amazing imagery.......I wish I were there now walking within the stanzas of each thought...of each Beautiful moment of Spring! Thanx for sharing Hemakumar, Shelley

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Ernestine Northover 20 April 2008

Switzerland is here in all its beauty. What a lovely write and again such wonderful imagery. Top marks. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Thad Wilk 18 April 2008

A beautiful write Hemakumar! Gentlly flowing and capturing, a great read! ! ! *10*! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Tsira Goge 18 April 2008

It is a bright and fine landscape, I feel live and pleasant a spring wind... Thank you... Tsira

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Alison Cassidy 17 April 2008

Your poem expresses a great love of nature and language. A pretty descriptive piece with elaborate visual ornamentation. A passionate homage to Spring. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 April 2008

Early morning dew drops moisten manicured gardens.....................really superb exposition of nature, spring when dances across its milieu in unison with tunes when scintillating by the scenic beauty unequalled,10/10, thanks for sharing

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 17 April 2008

very beautiful.....................

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David Desantis 17 April 2008

whoa, your making me want to be outside! ! not fair, im stuck in work...beautiful poem.....vivid imagery, and achieves its purpose of spring...great stuff

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Sandra Fowler 16 April 2008

One could almost wish for such a spring to be eternal. Luminous write, my poet friend. As always, Sandra

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Flora Gillingham 16 April 2008

A true Elysium, Hemakumar! I wish I could be there. F

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Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Colombo / Sri Lanka
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