Rosy amber sun rises beyond
high hazy blue mountains
Early morning dew drops
moisten manicured gardens
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I felt like I was standing there witnessing all this beauty with the accompanied scents of spring.
This surely is true poetic observation of all things naural. Very well prosed, and delightful to read. Best wishes for future work. From Fay Slimm....Thank you for the kind opinion of my piece called Longings.
I gave this a 10 because beauty is what poetry should be, in both the heart and mind. You grace both at the same time with your words. You are a pleasure to read. GW62
Rosy amber sun rises beyond hig hazy blue mountains! ! ! Excelent! ! Lovely feel of hte warmth of spring to the reader...
A colourful poem this …springs into reader’s mind. Hemakumar’s imagination ascends to ‘high hazy blue mountains! ’ Ten votes…
All colors and flowers of spring in this poem, a wonderful creation, spring the most vibrant season in visulas. a very good write
Hemakumar - Looking at the same spring rebirths you see beauty and harmony and I see struggle and. escape. Thanks for your kind remarks regarding my 'The Fallen.' Best wishes - Cheryl
you have painted spring in its most beautiful colors.. the soothing green pastures, cattles grazing, hyacinth etc...very sensuous and nerve pleasing...
What a great sigh of relief Life renews itself and despite the other winter world we know everything will be okay April here is the kindest month
This is simply Amazing imagery.......I wish I were there now walking within the stanzas of each thought...of each Beautiful moment of Spring! Thanx for sharing Hemakumar, Shelley
Switzerland is here in all its beauty. What a lovely write and again such wonderful imagery. Top marks. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
A beautiful write Hemakumar! Gentlly flowing and capturing, a great read! ! ! *10*! Best regards, Friend Thad
It is a bright and fine landscape, I feel live and pleasant a spring wind... Thank you... Tsira
Your poem expresses a great love of nature and language. A pretty descriptive piece with elaborate visual ornamentation. A passionate homage to Spring. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Early morning dew drops moisten manicured gardens.....................really superb exposition of nature, spring when dances across its milieu in unison with tunes when scintillating by the scenic beauty unequalled,10/10, thanks for sharing
whoa, your making me want to be outside! ! not fair, im stuck in work...beautiful poem.....vivid imagery, and achieves its purpose of spring...great stuff
One could almost wish for such a spring to be eternal. Luminous write, my poet friend. As always, Sandra
A very good commentary of beautiful spring, yes it was really a spring, thanks for shairng,10+.