Thursday, March 24, 2016

The Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

I traveled farther in than out
to find the spring I speak about;
and still I wonder if it flows
as first I watched it when it rose.
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 25 March 2016

Awesome write...the pleasure of discovery is the greatest pleasure in the world. A beautiful quest leading to discovery described in rich n minute details. The toil, the labor answered by the Earth in the form of a spring. Lovely writing.10 of course.

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Barry Middleton 25 March 2016

Thank you very much. This was written about 1979 after a trip to Montana where I discovered and uncovered this spring.

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