Sunday, September 21, 2014

The Spray Comments

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I brought deadly spray,
Poisonous and suffocating,
With a smell too irritating,
The spray killed the insects,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 06 November 2017

A nice double century..........................................................

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Amitava Sur 23 September 2014

Congratulation on your 200th poem and wishing you to touch many more mile stones of bigger hundreds ahead. It's a lovely poem expressing the fear from those injurious spray threatening human destruction, a good eye opener.

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Sarmad Mirza 23 September 2014

Very Nice Extremely Good No Words

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 22 September 2014

To face breathing problem on a barren earth with no milk........beautifully penned poem.

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Ramesh Rai 22 September 2014

Live and let live. To be insect free cleanliness is required. but your poem indicates a great harmony to nature. In nature all lives have some purpose. All are helpful to each other. So it is a great write sums up the melody of life. Thanks for sharing. Regards.

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Valsa George 22 September 2014

Like this spray that has lingering ill effects, the diabolic weapons which we use, not only brings down instant death but leads to infinite suffering and life long misery as happened in Hiroshima and Nagazaki....! So let us not dig our own grave! I see this poem as a grave warning!

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Salini Nair 22 September 2014

its the law of nature when equilibrium breaks some way......................great sir

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 September 2014

A very thoughtful poem..one has to think putting the hands on cheek Spray to spray small to big..a painful thank you

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