Sunday, April 23, 2006

The Spot Comments

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Stars, ignore the crimes occurring
like catfights under the windows.

Sometimes we're ashamed
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Mike Finley
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Chuck Audette 25 April 2006

Some great lines - the commonplace beauty of the oil spot in the wet street, the comparison with alley cats, the downward looking rather than up at the stars and moon. Wonderful. -chuck

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Joyce Chelmo 23 April 2006

Nice to see you have some new poems today..very introspective excellent write. Red

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Rich Hanson 23 April 2006

A very well-crafted poem. The images work well and are tightly tied together. I enjoyed it very much

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Mike Finley

Mike Finley

Flint, Michigan
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