The Spoiled Feast Comments

Expressed and described in stunning detail. I enjoyed this read thoroughly!

Such an in depth heartfelt write. I so love the expression and content of this piece. Well done indeed

Yes, it is a funny but good poem to me. it sounds like crows that attack vegtables here the the US. I have seen it done by monkeys though while I was overseas in the Philliphines.

women are so for fatherhood and also manhood when they go to other hands as a one way ticket-written well and thought provoking

I like this poem - just found some beans I was growing outside my back door all eaten by snails and felt a similar feeling of horror & woe!

it leaves a pleasant feeling... nice one

wow, i never thought of a bannana tree in that way. now whenever i see a banana ill think about this poem.

wow nice elegant way to describe the growth of banana. Like it

You can find beauty in everything, only if you know how to accomplish it. At one moment of a day I found everything Beautiful and wrote a poem 'Beauty'. To understand Beauty, we must have inner eyes. Surely you have.

Beautiful descriptions of a banana tree. I can't remember ever having seen one in actuality. Eaten plenty of bananas, though. Enough to question the possibility of my relationship to monkeyhood. I suppose that's why I could not imagine at first, here in the States, that the long tailed beasts were in fact Monkeys. Those who've lived around monkeys, I've heard, have no such illusions. In this case you'd have to build an awfully high and sharp fence. Or get a big dog, preferably one that doesn't bark, lest you find yourself wishing you'd simply capitulated to the monkeys. This is a fun poem of yours, interesting and instructive.

This does a fine job of relating how Mother Nature does her thing so wonderfully.

Great imagery! I have a tree of mine too that I planted from a seed, but it's a lemon tree and it's not old enough to produce fruit. I hope no monkeys attack it the first time it does. lol Very descriptive poem.