Tuesday, August 11, 2009

The Spirit, We All Should Feel.... Comments

Rating: 4.8

There is no religion,
That speaks for war,
That speaks for bloodshed,
That speaks for taking lives,
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kafil uddin raihan.
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Mary Sanchez 17 August 2009

It seems to me your eyes have seen what I have not, yet you made the your point quite clear. A very deep, thought consuming production. I wish you every happiness that you truely deserve for allowing others to see!

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Graham Russell 13 August 2009

if men of war could read this.. they would feel ashamed.... thank you

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Ken E Hall 13 August 2009

A point is made war sucks but it has been going on since man had clubs yes we need peace.......it will not last see the armourment factories great read regards

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Ronell Warren Alman 12 August 2009

Kafil! This is a superb writing! Indeed! This is 'the spirit, we all should feel'! This is what the world needs! And lots of it! Peace! Peace! And more Peace!

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Frank Lambert 12 August 2009

Hi Kalif, I can see you have a great passion for right and wrong... humanity. I agree with most of what you say here, however, your last line, kings. I can't agree with that. Nice write. Frank

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greaaaaaaaat Kafil! ! ! superb writing! ! ! full of humanity, peace, civilization, and mercy..... really it s a great piece! ! ! I touched one peaceful universe... I like it! ! ! +++++++10

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Jerry Hughes 11 August 2009

It took you a while to make your point Kafil, but eventually it was well made. Cheers, Jerry

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Lady Grace 11 August 2009

you gave life to this poem..this is nicely done...''respect''...if we have this, there's no war..there's no fight..there's no jealousy..there's no discomforts...naizz

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Joseph Poewhit 11 August 2009

Started with Caine killing Abel, it only grew with population.

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Matt Mooney 11 August 2009

The worst war we ever had in our country was the war between brothers-the civil war of the 1920's. It's as low as you can go on the human scale because it breaks up and destroys that which is most sacred to man -the family. Once again you have clearly and very poetically made a call for peace-brotherly peace. You should be listened to.

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Matt Mooney 11 August 2009

The worst war we ever had in our country was the war between brothers-the civil war of the 1920's. It's as low as you can go on the human scale because it breaks up and destroys that which is most sacred to man -the family. Once again you have clearly and very potically made a call for peace-brotherly peace. You should be listened to.

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Carol Gall 11 August 2009

i agree stop the fighting acceptance of each and everyone no matter who 10

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A Lifetime Of Fame 11 August 2009

Peace. That's what the world needs is peace. But patience my friend.

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kafil uddin raihan.

kafil uddin raihan.

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