The Spirit Comments

edmund, years ago i started a poem which began autumn used to tell a sad tale a poem i have yet to finish, a poem which explores feelings you do in this poem. for me spring and fall are the prime seasons for poetry. perhaps g.m. hopkins felt this as well, which in part at least caused him to write spring and fall to a young child. do you know it? for me i've had a productive spring for poem writing. one which parallels some of what you've written here is titled semi-retired in early spring. all the best to you. gk

Let it play, indeed, I think you wrote this with a magic pen! !

I wish I had written this That's the only thing I can say It swept me away Full marks Edmund