The Spider's House Comments

Gives me the creeps!

Perfect Haiku gets a 5*

3) 1) I digress, you have made a great fascinating poem, short but very strong and powerful.5 Stars and to my favourites.

2) 2) but so true: it is a trap for the intruders, a safety net with death as the answer, whatever I call it: it IS a bait, necessity of life of the spider, but death of the guest, how wonderful: the spider kills many insects that we can really miss.

1) 1) His life, the death of the guest! Really awful. If we look closely, the spider's face is like death itself. Trully creepy! The spider web in bright sunlight is really artistic, especially if there are small drops of water,

Two dwellings came to mind. A prison and the White house at this present time.

An interesting net to catch it's prey. Deep and thoughtful poem.

Your visit to the spider's house as poet is quite meaningful. Aptly expressed.5 stars and to MyPoemList

Trap of death..very..there is depth in this lines

Interesting perspective