Saturday, May 20, 2023

The Spell Is Broken Comments

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As you build an empire of lies
With high unsurmountable walls
A gate of iron barring the intruders
You are sheltered from the multitude
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Nosheen Irfan
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 03 June 2023

truly amazing Nosheen Bravo! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 June 2023

It will take only a stone to break your shell You will have no respect but only fear...you are absolutely correct dear poetess!

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M. Asim Nehal 20 May 2023

A poet's heart always cry when they see injustice happening, my support goes with you and with all those innocent people who are suffering because of lawlessness and unnecessary instigation. Full ****

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Sandra Feldman 20 May 2023

No one can resist, the force and beautiful talent of your verse. Another wonderful example,5 shining stars!

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 May 2023

Very meaningful poem. Very rightly said. Loved it. Thanks.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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