The Spectrum Spirit Comments
Of the seven colours adorning the rainbow,
All equally graceful, all with the same glow,
The riverine blue does mollify the earth
With streams and ponds in abundance—nothing in dearth.
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Of the seven colours adorning the rainbow, I spoke to the rainbow it did not hear me PP ME thought deaf he too may be I smiled at the rainbow it did not smile back at me PPME thoght he must be as blind as me I rushed towards the rainbow it rushed farther away from PP ME what could I do but return with the rain in the eyes of PPME You must tell us how to contact your RAINBOW O GREAT youngest poet of PH a PRODIGY ARE ye
Thanks for the poem which reflects your great love of nature through some of the most exotic images I have ever seen. 'The Spectrum Spirit' is full of promise for the young poet's future projects. Thanks for sharing the poem.
A beautiful work of art nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, Vaibhav.
My best compliments to the Younker and rising poet dear Vaibhav Sinha for his lovely verse which is all round show on natute. Glorious poem to glorify nature!
Let me quote some lines from this amazing poem- - Curtains drawn! Now behold the golden, sunlit barley of the morn! ‘Fare thee well, oh nightly stars! ' cry the violets, ‘We take thy place while you're gone! ' And dotting this frame, the violets have become an enthralling feature, But only after the rainbow streaks the sky completed is this picture of nature!
A great poem- -The spectrum of colours that are inherent in rainbow are really scattered in the beauty of nature in different shapes.The riverine blue of earth in the sea and rivers, the emerald green of forest, amethyst gleam, the ruby of rising sun- - -all colours manifest their beauty in nature and so also in our life in different moods,
Dear Vaibhav, I can only join in the opinion of other poets that you have produced a wonderful poem. Your rainbow colours are so bright that one can't take eyes off them and enjoy. Thanks for sharing. Keep it up and have good luck!
Such a nice poem, Vaibhav. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
my friend this such a wonderful piece which would mesmerize the eyes on your readers, and it is also a well executed piece.
A wonderful poem! It's really unbelievable to have such a matured write from a young man of just 16 years! Appreciated and admired! So brilliantly composed! Great future ahead! Keep it up! God bless you!
Nice one... lengthy.. good spirit for a boy of 16...10 Nature has enough to give and forgive the selfish tendency but are we deserving really? Hasmukh Mehta
As desired I have read three of your poems Now you must learn to thank each poet who reads or comments on your poems AND THE ONLY way is to read their poems and if the commentators aren't too many sms them young man now ur on line WHERE RU FROM
The pen-picture is as good as a paint on a canvas! Well done! Keep it up.. With best wishes.
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The eye devours the scene of darkness and yearns for verdant lakes; It feasts on the deific light that beams on the canopies, clad in delight. An artist, a poet, a man who has poetry in him. tony