Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, January 9, 2014

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Eyes do all tricks
Yet smilingly stick
Show the high peak
And make opponent weak
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

touching Charles Atwood26 minutes ago It touches the heart in a way that a woman would expect Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

Talented Work Greg Rouse14 minutes ago The way the poem is constructed is nice but I have trouble fully grasping the images and direction. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

good R. Alex Sanders27 minutes ago says a lot but im not a fan of the poem

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Gajanan Mishra 09 January 2014

world that has no boundary, very good sir, I like it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

Eyes do all tricks Yet smilingly stick

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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