The Space Syringe. Comments

I must say I'm always skeptical of reading young poets-no offense to you of course-but I was pleasantly surprised to read your poem. I appreciate the fact that you observe reality and manipulate it in your words. Your idea is fairly profound realization for your age. Keep up the work.

I am impressed, indeed, young lady! This poem glides like a coin tossed 'cross a freshly glaced icepond. The Theme is both inventive & quite intruiging...You make me wish i had started penning, when i was your age...You have natural talent & a a vast spectrum of literary potential...Very Nice Work here, Brittney! FjR