Tuesday, January 8, 2008

The Space Between Us Comments

Rating: 5.0

My head rest
Upon the rise and fall of your chest
Fingers intertwined
Your lips cover mine
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Mackenzie Scholte
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Ashley Hart 23 February 2008

I can feel every word of the poem..the excitement, surprise, love..everything. Absolutely stunning!

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Jeannie Ann Clark 08 January 2008

Very good writing...thank you...

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Sylvi Sylva 08 January 2008

brilliant piece of writing, topmark i say

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