Wednesday, June 4, 2014

The Space Between Relaxation And Sleep Comments

Rating: 5.0

Flecks of sunlight permeate,
The contours,
Of the slight slits,
Of my eyes,
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Kaleb Falin
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Chinedu Dike 12 September 2014

You are good with words and sentence structure. A well articulated and brilliantly penned work of art. Brief but highly imaginative. I enjoyed this poem so much. Thanks for sharing and keep it up.

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Kaleb Falin

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Princeton, WV
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