To the field to the field
While it rained sowing till there's yield
Unto toil and our seed
Giving all as the earth has need
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I like the structure of your lines in the poem. A lovely and well penned piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
To the field to the field, deep our seed down the mud, really a lovely cultivation poem shared. I liked this.
Good organization, message clear, excellent diction. Good one there friend
Thanks allot, Mr Allotey.