Monday, September 22, 2014

The Sower And The Seed Comments

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To the field to the field
While it rained sowing till there's yield
Unto toil and our seed
Giving all as the earth has need
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George Samuel
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Allotey Abossey 01 July 2015

Good organization, message clear, excellent diction. Good one there friend

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George Samuel 06 July 2015

Thanks allot, Mr Allotey.

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Chinedu Dike 27 September 2014

I like the structure of your lines in the poem. A lovely and well penned piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Mantu Mahakul 22 September 2014

To the field to the field, deep our seed down the mud, really a lovely cultivation poem shared. I liked this.

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