The Source Comments

a soul stirring poem, a quest for eternal source...thought provoking

A thought beyond the Sources of Food, cloth and shelter An intellectual thought. Finally ends with essential realisation That very source of Love, Health and Freedom. Enjoyed reading the eternal sense in this poem. Thank you, dear poet.

A poem insearch of source... very good one. I can see a different Desantis in these lines..*10*

Meaningful lines, all those significant metaphors from eternal source, wonderful vision, great insight, a very good work

Hey my friend and how are you? Good read and the source is right. I have a couple for you to review when you have time: One Again Reality Blessings, Loyd

Nicely done and well crafted. Is there a great joy that comes from reading a poem? Yours made me think that as I read it. Thanks for that. 10

A really beautiful introspective poem. Like Justine, I really enjoyed the flow of it and the connection but always with the same message running through. Enjoyable read David. HG: -) xx

'in love there is health in health there is freedom' I think these last 3 lines speak a lot of truth. The refrain that runs through this poem repeats like a mantra but doesn't interrupt the flow of this deeply introspective and meditative poem. This is a poem that stills the mind and lets the reader focus. j x

Very thoughtful of you this one.... not one mention of a bit of sauce on the side... anywhere... tis good... eternal source yet hidden treasures... heehahee

good health....vigor....more freedom...mind is clear and free...eternal source is mind and soul...easily reach to God..above and beyond...

Everything comes to one...The law of cause and effect that is in science...the eternal source in religious belief is He...the Almighty One! ! ! As always greatly penned! ! ! Cate

Great piece bro.....very well composed and delivered with perfection as always.. Best wishes...*10* Jon

If you find the eternal source, let me know...in the meantime...here's to eternity...Coach

I like this David, it reminded me of the eternal source energy I gain through Tai Chi, since discovering it's powers, I have tapped into it on several occasions when the need was great and never have I been dissappointed. The wonder of the eternal source is that is is just that, eternal, never in short supply and love is it's greatest tap, which leads to both health and freedom from the ties that bind us. A most enjoyable read, very thought provoking, smiling at you, Tai