Sunday, March 22, 2020

The Sound Of The Trump Comments

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An earthquake rattled Salt Lake City
No deaths but one thing is a pity
On top of the temple an angel stands
Holding a trumpet high in his hands
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Kim Barney 27 April 2020

Nice rhymes, good use of couplets. I personally felt the earthquake that rocked the Salt Lake City area, even though I live about twenty miles away. I also felt several of the aftershocks. Just like Ronnie, whose comment is below, I was drawn to the poem by the title, thinking it would about you-know-who.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 April 2020

An earthquake rattled Salt Lake City No deaths but one thing is a pity On top of the temple an angel stands Holding a trumpet high in his hands. city, pity, hands and stands. wonderful rhythmic. tony

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