I sit and play
To the sound of the strings
They take me to a place
of nothing but peace
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An atmosphere of serenity slipped over my being as I read this harmony write.... Wonderful. Karen
Dave, a meditative and gentle poem. Good stuff. I also invite to read my poem Wings discarded on a headland found.
very simple, but successfully showed your playful and peaceloving heart, I like this poem.
The sound of the spring can give one a bliss full peace if it is played harmoniously, otherwise the sounds are noises, however, your poem is written so mystically musical that spreads a heavenly harmonious bliss.
Very good line I pray the angels/that watch over me. Congratulation Mr Dave. Yours Gajanan Mishra
Short and sweat with a tone that resonates in the eyes of its beholder. Great Poem
A melody that will forever resonate. In tune, a meditation of the mind. Sucked in to complete bliss. Relaxed and not a single thought that brings a worry, a care, or despair. And for this utopia everyones is unique and a rarity. Sometimes it is so hard come by. And at other times your always there. Riding the waves as the tides come in then go back out. That is what this life is all about. Cheers to your inspiration, brought on by the muse.
a nice peaceful feel to your poem. a good write