Wednesday, March 25, 2009

The Sound Of Rain... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lie so relaxed in my bedroom reading the novel about love….

Trickle Trickle Trickle…..is the sound of the falling rain…yes I can hear it...
It’s so refreshing…It’s also a little scented…with a soft breeze blowing in gently though the open window.
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Premila Patel
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Eyan Desir 09 October 2009

Some beautiful words were painted in this poem making very beautiful to read good job

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Rup Pokharel 13 September 2009

wow! ! very beautiful piece. nice to read...10++++ if you have some spare time do go thro'my TRUE INDEED MY ETERNAL SAY ODD DAY ACCOUNT FOR THE UNBORN and do cast vote if it deserves and give me your comments please.

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Fiona Davidson 04 April 2009

Beatiful image filled write Premila...thank you ....10++

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Nimal Dunuhinga 04 April 2009

The sound of rain gives vivid meanings and if the rain continues what a solace to the burning heart? A well written poem to the reader's heart.

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