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The Sound Of Life - 08 Comments

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The song of bygone roads

Lapping up a wisp of sluggish sunshine
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Prativa Rani 29 October 2017

Lapping up a wisp of sluggish sunshine on a wintered old ox. Lovely line, Often our past is like a wisp of sunshine lapped on the old weathered skin of the present. 10+++ for the sharing.

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Rajendra Rout 28 October 2017

The song of bygone roads Lapping up a wisp of sluggish sunshine on a wintered old ox.sir it was a beautiful poem.thanks for shairing...10++++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 02 October 2017

Lapping up a wisp of sluggish sunshine on a wintered old ox. Nice poem with beautiful line. Thanks. 10+++

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Anita Aparajita Das 02 October 2017

The song of bygone roads Lapping up a wisp of sluggish sunshine on a wintered old ox. Nice write. 10+++

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D Priyanka Singh 02 October 2017

The song of bygone roads Lapping up a wisp of sluggish sunshine on a wintered old ox. Great poem shared. 10+++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 02 October 2017

The song of bygone roads Lapping up a wisp of sluggish sunshine Beautifully written haiku. 10+++++

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