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The Sound Of Life - 07 Comments

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The sound of ambition, climbing

Upon the thin, steep, unsteady, quivering road
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Kshirod Kumar Dehury 22 November 2017

Tha sound of ambition climbing Upon the thin, steep, unstead, quivering road like a string attached to a kite. SO, Nice this poem, thanks for sharing.10+++++.........+

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 November 2017

Life! ! Unsteady along the way at times. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Prativa Rani 29 October 2017

The sound of ambition, climbing Upon the thin, steep, unsteady, quivering road Like a string attached to a kite. Ambition sings a song of steep and hard movement like the strings of a kite. Well said. 10++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 02 October 2017

The sound of ambition, climbing Upon the thin, steep, unsteady, quivering road A great poem, thanks poet. 10+++

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Anita Aparajita Das 02 October 2017

The sound of ambition, climbing Upon the thin, steep, unsteady, quivering road Like a string attached to a kite. Beautifully written. Thanks. 10++++

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Anita Aparajita Das 02 October 2017

The sound of ambition, climbing Upon the thin, steep, unsteady, quivering road A great write. 10+++

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D Priyanka Singh 02 October 2017

The sound of ambition, climbing Upon the thin, steep, unsteady, quivering road Like a string attached to a kite. Nicely penned. 10++++

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D Priyanka Singh 02 October 2017

The sound of ambition, climbing Upon the thin, steep, unsteady, quivering road Like a string attached to a kite. Great poem. 10+++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 02 October 2017

The sound of ambition, climbing Upon the thin, steep, unsteady, quivering road Like a string attached to a kite. Lovely haiku. 10++++

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