The heads of fingers
Loaded
With tons
Of adoration,
...
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A great idea articulated through use of excellent images. Well done!
How beautiful. How balm. You no doubt really have calm sensibilities and the greatest ones. It can almost never would occur to one's minds to write such a poem. Your description is very wellk, in addition to the words you used to express things.
hannah brandeberry (11/4/2009 9: 33: 00 PM) I like it :) its deep and passionate :)
i was hooked by 'white zone'. so old and in many ways discribed subject as music appearing here in somewhat sober, technichal words as 'tons' and 'zone', and something else i'm not able to put in thoughts - that is a dream, in true. thank you.
All poets here have said it all. Poetically knitted. I love it.
very well composed, and written as good as its tittle. Nice..
wow your poems are good they are way better than mine keep writing and tell me when youve made new ones! !
Fantastic.Very nice metaphors and imageries.Ecstasy is heighted by reading the poem.
I like your poems, , let me know if you like mine..Hope you will smile when reading them..
it's very nice one i like your type good work 10+++ i like the harp i love its sound
A melodious and alliterative piece. Just one small point - I think the opening line should read 'tips of fingers' instead of 'heads'. S :)
woooow i am speachless... beautiful beyond what words can express, or what eyes can see or or even for the ear to have heard... u layed ur heart out my friend very beautiful i love it