Thursday, June 11, 2009

The Sound Of Dreams Comments

Rating: 4.6

The heads of fingers
Loaded
With tons
Of adoration,
...
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
COMMENTS
Krystal Vincent 02 March 2011

woooow i am speachless... beautiful beyond what words can express, or what eyes can see or or even for the ear to have heard... u layed ur heart out my friend very beautiful i love it

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Cúcídh Mac Cuagh 06 March 2010

A great idea articulated through use of excellent images. Well done!

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Ihab Marzouk 05 November 2009

How beautiful. How balm. You no doubt really have calm sensibilities and the greatest ones. It can almost never would occur to one's minds to write such a poem. Your description is very wellk, in addition to the words you used to express things.

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Obinna Eruchie 05 November 2009

hannah brandeberry (11/4/2009 9: 33: 00 PM) I like it :) its deep and passionate :)

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Helen Vorst 03 November 2009

i was hooked by 'white zone'. so old and in many ways discribed subject as music appearing here in somewhat sober, technichal words as 'tons' and 'zone', and something else i'm not able to put in thoughts - that is a dream, in true. thank you.

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Kctony Xtopher Nkwocha 02 November 2009

All poets here have said it all. Poetically knitted. I love it.

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 01 November 2009

very well composed, and written as good as its tittle. Nice..

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Khilil Perry 31 October 2009

Very good

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Eyan Desir 31 October 2009

A fine and beautiful poem

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Chitra - 30 October 2009

a musial metaphor..resonant sounds!

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Breanna Burge 30 October 2009

wow your poems are good they are way better than mine keep writing and tell me when youve made new ones! !

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 30 October 2009

Fantastic.Very nice metaphors and imageries.Ecstasy is heighted by reading the poem.

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Amandamae =) 30 October 2009

.....Beautiful......

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Indira Babbellapati 30 October 2009

a good simile...of the sea and the sun

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Dan Leaver 30 October 2009

I like your poems, , let me know if you like mine..Hope you will smile when reading them..

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Mohammed Hassan 29 October 2009

it's very nice one i like your type good work 10+++ i like the harp i love its sound

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Susan Jarvis 29 October 2009

A melodious and alliterative piece. Just one small point - I think the opening line should read 'tips of fingers' instead of 'heads'. S :)

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Yuanyuan Kelly 29 October 2009

pretty good... i like your style of writing

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Joseph Poewhit 29 October 2009

Not many people play the harp.

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Last hakkaobake 29 October 2009

good stuff 'caress soft the sweet of harp' 8

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