Friday, April 18, 2008

The Sound Of An Unbreakable Heartbeat... Comments

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His voice fills the dark...I can't see...I smell fire and danger.. .
Where are they? I don't know, I only know this fear.
Fear, I can feel in my fingers.
No! Run! I scream but they don't seem to hear me.
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Kenzie Lynn
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Chantelle Clark 18 April 2008

Very well written to captivate the reader and the use of the literary device of imagery is used well. Chantelle

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